Monday, August 03, 2009


I watch the wind
whip passion through the trees,
and whispering to my heart
I promise to better tend
to the garden blooming within,
to daily inspect the strength of string
that’s tied from it,
to you.


Atlanta Carter said...

I've always liked the idea of a supernatural string tied between lovers. I've even written about it (in something that will never see the light of day).

This strong throughout, but the image of the wind whipping passion through the trees is inspired.

Athena Marie said...

Thank you Atlanta! :-) It's nice to see you again.